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I released the RP yesterday, now here's the comic version of a few lines (with those couple extra lines in the middle two panels not written in yet; Amy is way too chatty for them to be left blank). I don't remember how much was explained in the section I posted, and I don't know if you read it (do read it; it's good!), but Heath has a cane because he was a superhero until he was shot in the knee eight years ago. He now runs a comic/game/card shop in Berkeley, and Amy is the hero following in his footsteps, Revenant.
I played around a lot with their speech bubbles; I'd really like feedback on those. Amy's are loose, even aimless, while Heath's are direct; this is emphasized when he speaks in font and she speaks in my handwriting.
Also, the first and second panels don't have their permanent backgrounds yet; I just wanted them to not be white because they looked gross. The colors in the last two panels and on all the characters, on the other hand, are final and I would appreciate feedback if something isn't working. If the speech bubbles in the final panel are too dark, I would really like to know.
I hope you enjoy this; it's a lot of fun to work on and I'm looking forward to finishing it!
I played around a lot with their speech bubbles; I'd really like feedback on those. Amy's are loose, even aimless, while Heath's are direct; this is emphasized when he speaks in font and she speaks in my handwriting.
Also, the first and second panels don't have their permanent backgrounds yet; I just wanted them to not be white because they looked gross. The colors in the last two panels and on all the characters, on the other hand, are final and I would appreciate feedback if something isn't working. If the speech bubbles in the final panel are too dark, I would really like to know.
I hope you enjoy this; it's a lot of fun to work on and I'm looking forward to finishing it!
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